My Sad Galaxy

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My Sad Galaxy

Postby tri tran » Tue Feb 17, 2009 1:34 am

The lonesome stars twinkle dimly,
The orange moon puts on her silky veil
While hiding her shy beam.
Summer night, mourmful; skies gloomy
Without comets and star rocks,
Except now and then, a fiery ember
Sails by quietly without greetings.
Silence, a whispering wanderer,
Seeking a place to rest.
Leaves have changed into night wear,
Swaying sadly in the cold--
While the breeze flutes its love music to the wrens.
And, my soul, an inhabitant of this galaxy,
Sails away to seek liveliness elsewhere.
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Re: My Sad Galaxy

Postby Wil » Wed Feb 18, 2009 11:53 pm

Or you could stick around and stir things up here in hopes that the commotion might attact an ass-teroid or such. :twisted:
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Re: My Sad Galaxy

Postby shudhutumi2003 » Tue Apr 14, 2009 9:20 am

this is so post-wordsworthian....
[color=#FF40BF]blocks of Sylvia![/color]
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Re: My Sad Galaxy

Postby Wil » Wed Apr 22, 2009 8:39 pm

Beyond my overly quick quip of a comment, the poem touches the sadness my deeper soul struggles with in this life of quiet desperation. I too wonder at the wothlessness of physical effort and dream of vacating for more meaningful climes. Alas, I am trapped by my over developed sense of responsibility to those grown used to my efforts. I do not fear death. I fear simply working at mundane tasks until my time is over without having plukbed the depths of epignosos and cast monkee dung into the face of righteous presumption.

I DO like this poem.
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